hi guys! i really hope you like my latest commission! i love it very much, it’s my first one i think did very well on in a while. all feedback is welcome!
(Please let me know if I should improve on anything, I know there’s a bunch of stuff I can improve on!)
This is Nice. I like the camera perspective. What Game is this for?
It’s for a Modern German Military group. Thanks for the love !!
You’re Welcome ! 
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I dig the composition on this one. Posing is great for all characters, and I like the details such as the clothing folds and the rain effect. A few things though.
-Character on the left has a pretty ambiguous pose due to the camera placement. I suggest rotating the camera to the left and showing their legs as for this is present in the other two characters. It’s a very simple fix and would contribute to a better composition.
-The sky has very high contrast; the blacks and whites are very separate from each other. I know that the piece itself has pretty high contrast, which I believe is your intent, which isn’t necessarily bad; however I would like to imagine the contrasts as percents: let’s say that there is a scale of 1-100, with 1 being basic contrast, and 100 being highest contrast, and two factors to take into account: the character + ground render, and the sky background. I’d say that the character and ground render would be around a 50%; a good balance of contrast, but then the sky would be a 75%, which separates itself more from the character renders than it blends, which would look better in my opinion.
Other than that, you did a great job with the lighting, posing, and just general layout on this render.
thanks so much with your feedback sky! i feel honored to have you even notice me haha 
Composition done just great! Poses 
Well I dig Lighting soooo much! Great done! 
Thanks so much man !!!
Np! I’m always glad to help!
Is the group still using this? Would love to have something like it made up.
