So I’ve been working on a thumbnail for my friend’s and I’s cafe. Here is a render for one of them.
What could I do to improve?
I like the way the character is positioned and the lighting is good, but all the reflections, in my opinion, need to go. Clothes like hoodies are not shiny, and it’s weird that you can see the clipboard in it. The reflections on the spikey hair is also throwing me. One other thing I would change is make sure the whole character is visible so their arm isn’t cut off ever so slightly. 
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It looks cool but you definately have to add a background! The background gived the picture a space feeling. Atm it just looks empty.
On the other hand I think you did a great Job!
- Cheerful
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I finished the GFX, and it now has a background.
(It’s for a training center, so that’s why the session times are there.)
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From an artist, I’d say show the full body. Just in case you would like to re scale it in the future. Also,
The glow/reflections need to go, it only fits some things. Otherwise, it looks pretty decent.
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