Feedback on my latest Render

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#1

Today, I just downloaded Photoshop, as some people posted in one of my popular topics listed:
https://devforum.roblox.com/t/what-online-software-or-app-do-you-use-as-help-of-roblox-studio-and-why/797627

Using Blender and Photoshop, and a couple youtube tutorials from @Sheasu, I have finished my final design and improvement after I posted my first blender GFX.

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I wanted to add text next to my render, but I would appreciate some feedback first!

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#2

This looks really good! I like the blur affect on the side. I don’t have any feedback right now!

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#3

Hello!

Hope my feedback will help you :

  • Add light in the render
  • Add a text or something, it’s kinda empty
  • Make the render more dynamic
  • The red and white band in the background are a bit pixelated, you should try the pen tool (If it’s not the tool you used)
  • Add some shadow it can look super cool
  • Why not trying to add color corrections ? For you can install the plugin Camera Raw, Bullet Looks (It’s a Sony Vegas plugin but they have also an app that you can use for add color corrections), make it by yourself or use a color correction pack from a graphic pack. (Me i use the CC pack of the Jelly Pack, by Jelly Brush, it cost 10$)

Anyway it’s a good work for a first time, GG!

Have a good day, hope it will help you.

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#4

I’ll take a look at that, thanks for your suggestions!

#5

Thanks for your feedback! :slight_smile:

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#6

A would recommend adding an area light behind the character to avoid having those dark shadows on the back and have rim lighting which usually makes renders more interesting.

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