Hello everyone! I need some feedback for a lobby club house that I made! If you could pls give honest opinions and what I some suggestions for what I can do to improve pls let me know! Thanks!!
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Note: When a player touches the door they teleport to a big inside area
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Looks pretty plain, I’d add more shapes and a details, just so it looks more detailed! I think if you add what I said, it might look really good!
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ok cool I kinda wanted a low poly but I do agree with you! Thanks
lostlid
(lenny)
June 13, 2020, 9:32pm
#4
The text seems a bit off, try removing the glow from the outside. You could also use a colour wheel to see what colours would work well together.
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The color of the words Club House don’t really match. Overall looks nice.
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Ok I will try that thanks for the suggestion!
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Ok I will fix that👍🏼 I have started working a bit more on it
I like the build but I feel its plain and very basic. Try adding more detail to it and making it look nice.
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Luxorz
(Luxorz)
June 13, 2020, 10:36pm
#9
Looks very plain and bland… I’d try to use other materials and change the text. Also, you should make your own trees for a touch of authenticity.
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Ik I’m working on them rn in blender, they just a place holder
Thx for advice!!