Feedback on my Lobby!

Hello.
I have been working on a game called Food Fight, for now I have only done the lobby and the logo.


Logo:
I would appreciate any feedback :smile:
Game link: Food Fight [SOON] - Roblox

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The lobby looks rather cool! Quite unique as well :slight_smile:

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The lobby is very nice i like it

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I like the cartoon map! Keep up the good work!

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Beautiful! Lovely map! Great work!

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This lobby is very low-poly. And, it has a lot of detail for a low-poly build. I love the design of the bridges and the layout of the islands. However, I would say the text of the AFK Island’s sign is not fitting for the theme of the lobby. I suggest changing it to black coloring and making it formatted properly.

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Additionally, I love the picture above’s portion of the lobby. It shows that you care about other contributors to this build and it adds a playful feel to your lobby.

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Thanks for the feedback :smile: ! I’ll try to fix the text. but the other characters on the island of credits did not contribute to the development of my lobby, they are just friends who sometimes give me feedback or ideas, and I thought it would be nice to give them a little credit.

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That’s so sweet of you; giving your friends a little shutout! You’re also so very welcome for the feedback.

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Also the logo is beautiful! You did a great work, you put all of your effort doing that game and that is appreciated and noted! Lovely!

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No problem! Is very appreciated your work!

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Very low-poly, style of cartoon map! Love it! In my mind, I wouldn’t change any. Keep it up!

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Lobby looks great, and so does the thumbnail! Sounds like a fun game, I’ll have to try it when you’re finished :grin:

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The low poly builds are pretty amazing! I think you can improve it by adding more details into the rocks ( or whatever it is ) at the edge of the map. Other than that, nice work!

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The lobby looks good but the giant rocks could have diff shapes and sizes tbh it would prob look a bit better
but everything else looks very good

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I like your lobby. I hope you add more detail to it in the future.

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BRAVO!!! This looks beautiful!

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This is a great low-poly lobby. I recommend to change up the rock border by adding different sizes, shapes, and colors. Last thing is the shops don’t really seem to stand out, try making the pads bigger and messing around with the colors.

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Everything looks very good!
Just the red outline of text looked little bit dead to me so i made it rainbow :smile:
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the cartoony style looks cool but i found some problems
1.The mountains are too repetitive


2. The wood on the bridge is very small

(Its only my opinion lol)

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I would agree on the mountains,

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