Feedback on my Lobby

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#1

Salutations,

I am currently working on a game that I hope has a lot of potentials, I can’t really give out information about the game due to it being very early beta.

I am in need of feedback on my lobby!

I would appreciate things such as

  • Hows the detail, what would you add?
  • What to add in the big space?
  • Hows the lighting?

Any feedback will help me out so much thank you!

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#2

This is my first ever lobby, I usually work on cafes so I am enjoying the new experience

#3

I’m no builder but I can tell you that the lobby looks outstanding! Keep up the awesome work.

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#4

This looks pretty nice. The colors are vibrant, I love that low-poly style, and everything looks good together.

  • As for details, I’d add some scattered grass, bushes, or other foliage to bring the islands to life. Depending on what your game is going to be like, you could add buildings or shops on the big island, as well.
  • The lighting looks good, too- It feels soft and easy on the eyes. The ‘fog’ makes it feel like you’re in the clouds, which is a good vibe for a floating island.

All in all, this is a great lobby. I hope your game does well when it releases!

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#5

Thank you for the suggestions I am well definitely going to try that.

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#6

Looks great, one thing I would recommend though is maybe trying to make the water fall more realistically.

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#7

The grass didn’t look quite as good, would it be fine just to do bushes, etc.

#8

The Islands look absolutely amazing!
Maybe add some vegetation, benches and a main area where there could be leaderboards, shops, etc. only if your game genre fits it.

Otherwise amazing work! I can’t wait to play the game!

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#9

the lighting is very nice.
the low-poly look you tried looks very good, too.
it’s very empty, though. it might not be too much of a problem if your game is support to have a lot of players in it at once.

things you could add (you don't need to add all of these if you don't want too

maybe you should try adding different types of vegetation in too?
maybe you could add a leaderboard/player list sign? or a sign that tells what theme/map the next round will have? if it fits, of course.
you could also add a few benches near the trees, and maybe some sports balls? you maybe could make them bounce really high if they stuck or fall off the island?
you should try adding lanterns too!
you could try adding more clouds in the distance. we seem to be up in the clouds, after all. ^-^

your build is very good. I hope your game gets really popular! ^v^

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#10

Thank you this helps me a lot! I will definitely put these into consideration.

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#11

Of course! I am going to be adding some shops and leaderboards :D.

#12

looks a little empty fill it up more

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