Feedback on my logo?

***Hello, I’m Jaden I’m a 13-year-old self-taught logo designer and I’ve been doing it for a few months of and on. ***

***I made a Photopea logo for the first, and I was wondering if I could get a little feedback on it. ***
Please stay on-topic when writing feedback, I’m looking to improve so this is the perfect way. :grin:

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It looks pretty nice and cool. There is one thing I’d probably change, and that is to make the pumpkin wider and less stretched (totally not my OCD :laughing:)

Oh shoot, I just realised one more thing. Take a look at that “Y” :wink:

Other then that, cool beans :+1:

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Can you explain what’s wrong with the “y”? :sweat_smile:

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It is more apart from letter R compared to other letters in spacing.

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Agreed everything looks good other than the Y and the unstretched pumpkin

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You should correct the letters to look thicker and more united.

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Simply 10/10. Characters are spooky and that and bat balances colors.

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The logo is pretty nice but there are some things that has to be fixed.
The Y of the Bakery is kinda long and the Halloween pumpkin’s size is long and the width is thin.

This has to be fixed now.
Just need to recreate those things.

I really like the way you made this logo

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Looks good. But the pumpkin is kind of stretched and it doesn’t really fit in that well. Also unlike the other letters, the Y is really far away from the letter before.

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Look Nice

Some Problems

I Think the Bakery is a little away from Arizona and Look at pumpkin it will be better if it be wider and the text effect Is a little bit much i think Overall its good Keep up!

Edit:Dont foget the spacing of Y

Hello @JxdenzWrld. I like how you replaced the O in Arizona with an pumpkin emoji. I recommend you to use a free vector pumpkin because it will look nice in my opinion.