Feedback on my lost Island

Hello everyone.
I’ve been working on an abandoned island for the last few days and now it’s done! Of course I’d love to hear your feedback on this. Please tell me what I could improve! :smile:


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Note: I only wanted to use roblox studio for this build.


Have a great day/night!

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looks good even the lights too

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The neon materials here and there kinda look out of place in my opinion in contrast with the realistic vines, grass, sun, and ground. But other than that I think it looks pretty good.

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The neon rings look out of place

9/10

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I’d like to start off by saying the build looks really amazing, it ties in all the essentials you’d need when it comes to world building. However I would recommend swapping out the neon material to match the overall vibe of this lost island.

From imagery alone it gives off more of a Aztec architecture and the trees really do aid that vibe of a more tropical location. With the addition of the neon it adds that imbalance of what people might see when looking at something that is quite ancient with the add of neon which would fit into a more futuristic theme.

Nonetheless great world building just need to adjust the neon element

TL:DR - The neon makes an imbalance of the original vibe of the location

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First of all, thank you so much for this good feedback!

I will definitely work on the neon parts! :smile:

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