Hi everyone, I am a builder and programmer at Roblox.
I don’t really feel like my builds are great,
I try to become better and better, but I feel like I am failing on building.
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It looks great! It looks like a typical low poly building. Great job! 
hi,
This kind of simple building makes games feel special, continue like this! you can experiment with other styles as well 
This looks very nice. It’s a simple and modern building and if you want to, you can add some signs to make it into a hotel! OR, you could experiment with different colours and see what is the best for you. There’s a website I would recommend trying, it’s called coolors and you can basically generate different colour palettes so this will be really helpful!
Here’s the link:
Thank you for the feedback!
I will work on signs and more in my future builds.
And thank you for the link!
I really appreciate it!
Great work, I recommend playing around with lighting as it would make your buildings look even better! Keep up building and you will improve over time.
It’s very good!
Maybe add extras?
There are too many windows for a building this size. 1 door in a building like this is unusual. I suggest adding more detail such as window glaze and windowsills that actually come out, add a fire escape or something that gives the building flavor, Also, try to experiment with color combo. Looks good but this is a simple 5 min build that is fairly easy to remake. hope this helped
It’s a beautiful model you accomplish the theme however. If you’re looking for ideas, then I totally think it’d be good to add objects to the building itself, such as a sign connected in the middle of the build and possibly a door level consider throwing another color to the door - frame around infrequently. Low poly tends to strive for brighter colors I would recommend messing around with the colors or lighting to capture a cartoony look.
I think it’d enhance the already unique aspect. Your colors look a bit dull maybe look at a few images to see what I’m talking about the vibrant colors. And I think if you add a (few) objects and more color it’ll lol more interesting.
