Hello guys i recently started to build more studio and less in blender and im currently making a simulator game and this is the first design of the shop. I also have a sell building that looks like this but it just has the text as Sell instead of Shop
Any feedback is of course appreciated!
This would be good for a simulator type of game!
Thanks this is for a simulator game!
It looks a bit too blocky, maybe try adding in some cartoony textures, A slanted roof to give it more shape.
Example:
Yeah i probably should do this to give it more detail but it is a cartoon styled game but i will think about it!
It looks pretty good so far however, in my opinion, I would recommend adding more vibrant colors to it the blue color you’re going for doesn’t match the color scheme, maybe try blue and other colors with that around the entire building, the windows look alright, but it’s giving the building a very empty spot in my opinion I would recommend placing another shape on the shop and you could possibly place more windows on it making it less empty.
Maybe add a small window on the door and possibly add more details around the building you could try toning the neon down a bit. Try using another color for the roof or placing objects on it something that looks good to you so the roof doesn’t look plain and empty I think that will add a nice touch to your build since it looks all basic. I believe it could use some improvements. Small details could improve the overall look of it.
Thank you for the feedback i will take this into account!
Are you trying to make this ? Feedback on simulator map - #14 by Luxorz ? its good but the windows are chunky, the door does not have a frame and the shop sign looks weird. Good luck
Add more shapes into this building because this is looking very blocky and simple.
Looks Pretty Nice,
Though I would recommend changing the font of the “SHOP” Text,
and possibly make it also All in caps. but pretty nice.
Although still nice to be used for a Simulator Game, I think it should be taken into consideration the shape of the building, as the Building looks somewhat Blocky still and there is no doorframe around the Door. I think you can create a few improvements along the way too besides just what I said, It looks a little bit plain too(If you aren’t done building, No offense!).
when your making low poly it is better to use blender. I recommend you take away the neon. The roof is not looking to good either so do something with that to.
it looks similar but i just used the blue colour because its the colour of my gui
This is great for a first time! Nice job keeping the color scheme together.
I’d recommend not using neon for the door, and leaving it as “smooth plastic.” The window frames could be extruded a bit to create more visual texture, and could be made slightly bigger. If you’re up to it, try adding an accent color somewhere on the shop (ie adding a door frame, changing the “Shop” sign, etc).
100% there could be more things put on here, the windows look really simple and bland and the overall look on the building isn’t much.
You could try adding extra details to the side of the buildings or the back of it. From the perspective that I’m looking at, I’m seeing just a simple blue brick square windows and a shop sign.
If I had to edit it in any way my personal opinion is give it some frame work, don’t make it look like a fully solid pure blue wall. (Add some variety to it. A.K.A. some tiny details) because those go a long way.
I love it! This matches the simulator style entirely! I also favor how you enjoy these type ideas. But, my feedback to you would be lose the blocky shape, and I’d recommend if you use plugins more! here are some links to some I use! 
https://www.roblox.com/library/144950355/Building-Tools-by-F3X-Plugin
https://www.roblox.com/library/165534573/Stravant-ResizeAlign-Fixed
https://www.roblox.com/library/1223999426/Light-Editor
https://www.roblox.com/library/165687726/Stravant-GapFill-Extrude-Fixed
You don’t have to use them but, I highly recommend them!
I hoped this feedback helped! Have an amazing day. 
Really good low poly shop! It’s like shops in meepcity. Keep up with the amazing work! 
