Feedback on my main menu + level introduction cutscene?

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#1

hi! i’m actively developing a game based on the backrooms creepypasta, and i made a main menu + introduction cutscene for the levels! i really love how this all turned out, and i’d love to see how i can improve it. any feedback is greatly appreciated!!

now with that out of the way, here’s a video!

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#2

Everything about this is perfect! The art style of the UI, the introduction. Especially the part where the camera starts moving around rooms is just so cool! If I were you. I would change the inventory UI a bit, yknow, to make it fit in with the environment.

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#3

i was originally thinking of making a custom inventory, and i still am planning it, i’m just not sure how i’d actually implement it.

thank you so so much for your kind feedback by the way!!! <3

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#4

I would do some kind of loading bar maybe for the teleporting screen, it’s just kinda dark for now.

#5

Pretty nice camera manipulation! I could never do something like that.

As a UI Designer, the UI is pretty good and fits in with the game.
Here’s some suggestions for the UI.

  • Move the play button to where the credits button is
  • Change some play button elements to make it stand out just a bit.
  • Change the roundness of the info frame on the start screen.
  • Adjust the size of the start screen UI Frames.

Elements you can add:

  • Add a background blur on the start screen
  • Remove the core GUIS on the top right corner and the inventory. (Keep roblox menu and chat)
  • Add custom load screen when teleporting to a game level so it looks like you didn’t even teleport. (Just provides overall smoothness)
  • Add loading screen when first loading in the game. (Maybe like a small text label in the bottom left corner saying “loading…” then fades out when finished loading)

Just some suggestions.

Any questions? Feel free to reply.

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#6

these are some great ideas! i’ll keep these in mind. thank you so much for the feedback!

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#7

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I don’t like how this looks like.

You can make it smaller, because the text leaves the frame.

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#8

yeah i was gonna fix that but got lazy because i was tired lol

i’ll fix it when i get home