Feedback on my mansion build

Hello!
I recently made a mansion that I am planning to use as my future real life house and to improve my building skills, I would like you to rate it from 1 - 10 if you want you can give me some ideas on how I can decorate the garden because it is very empty, here I will put the game if you want to check it out Mansion showcase - Roblox



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Nice! I like the simplicity, the large field of grass, But there’s just something off about the door and driveway. Maybe changing them to be more modern and lining the walk way to the mansion correctly. But without that this is a pretty good Build and Idea.

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Nice job! I do recommend some more variation in shape in the roof and walls. Both of them look very flat.
To do this:

  • Change the bottom frame to a more adventurous shape. Find a more visually appealing shape because currently it looks uninteresting.
  • You can also mask the walls to hide the uninteresting shape with plants or cool designs.
  • For the roof, add some parts that are differently shaped. You can have some parts be lower and higher than others to create that much needed variation. If needed, add a chimney or some other roof decoration like a birdhouse.
  • This is unrelated but you definitely need more decoration in your yard. Some decoration good for the outdoors are gardens, playgrounds, or even a pool. That or have a humongous soccer field!

Of course if this doesn’t fit your budget in the future, you can throw out some of my advice. Feel free to design, imagination is the only limit!

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I like it! Although I feel the textures are kinda flat and bland and the lighting can also be improved. I would also like to see the inside as well, pretty cool (8/10)

Okay thank you I will try adding details to it

Thank you ! I will try to add the things you told me to, also like you said I think it is a good idea to try more shapes, thanks you for your feedback and it will be appreciated.