Feedback on my map and pets

Just feedbacks. Thats will be simulator.

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I always loved the look of low poly map builds. The pets look very detailed and cute, especially the… dragon one??? image (this)

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It is looking really nice, keep up the great work :slight_smile:

I would be a bit cautious of how small this area looks, it seems a little claustrophobic for an upbeat simulator

Just one question, do you use imported meshes? If so how do you avoid weird hit boxes on stuff like the trees and angled terrain?

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Yep , im importing meshes. Im not avoiding anything xD. Them are good for me. Also thats mini area in the sun world. And my areas are super huge. Character just 1/4 of portal.

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The snowy area looks a bit weird. I think you should make the ground lighter and change the color of walls around it and it would look better after that.

You know what, if you’re gonna make a simulator make it good, and you’ve done ALL that, the pets look AMAZING! great job I can’t wait to play it!

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Looks really nice. I like the trees the most, they just stand out and the shadows add a nice effect to them. A suggestion would be to make the pets eyes a bit simpler, such as black circles with a shining effect.

I think these are great! I do feel that the snowy area is a bit off. Maybe flip the colors? Place the white where the grey is and put the grey where the white is? Maybe that works. Also I love the pets. That’s one thing I haven’t been interested in creating but I think I will need some for an upcoming project. By chance do you sell pets?

i like the map but the pet look like nightmare

I really love the work you put for this low poly build. Especially since the pine tree leaves are tilted differently to not make everything look copy-pasted over and over again. I also like how mythical and cartoonish the purple tree looked like, mainly because of the different colored stars surrounding it.
I have a suggestion for the beach map, you could add more environment to it. For example, you can add a cute tiny sandcastle with a small red bucket next to it somewhere around the map.
For the grey map, you should change the brown dirt to have a darker shade of gray. The colors brown and gray don’t align with each other at all, so the colors look very odd when put together in the same area.
As for the pets, I think you should make their eyes less human-like because they look to realistic for a pet. Maybe put some more cutesy expression to it? They look emotionless honestly…

Ty for reply. I love your suggestions but ill not change pet eyes cuz thats my style.

Grey area thats moon xD. Ty for reply tho.

The map looks amazing! Although the pets could use some work, maybe try using a square with smooth/round edges and maybe remove the gradient?

Ty for reply. I dont wanna make pets smooth cuz thats will be basic simulator. I like gradient , thats adding more details to pets.

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Ah okay. Makes more sense now :smile:

These maps seem really good, some of the maps are a bit too small though and it would be better if they were bigger, such as the purple map. The Pets seem cool as well, the lobby looking map looks great though. I think that if you put some benches and some lights around the area it would look better.

Awesome builds!
For a few of the maps though, they seem a bit plain and empty. I would suggest filling up these spaces with something.

Ty for reply! I already fully changed all map xD

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Lol, all good :smile:

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These are some very nice maps & pets - the only thing I would recommend is adding some more color on the maps, this could be adding more whites or blacks.