Feedback on my map build "Atomna Core"

Me and my friend made a map for @BakonBot’s zombie-shooter game, Dread!

I would like to get feedback and constructive criticisms so I can do better for future projects!
Game link: Atomna Core [SHOWCASE] - Roblox

Screenshots:


(yes the claws on the core spin.)

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I think it all looks pretty nice! Just a teensy-weensy little thing. In the control room with the chairs, I’d have them moved a little randomly away from the desk. Also, I think the ones on the far left look a little too perfectly fallen. Maybe rotate it around a little bit so it looks more haphazard? Otherwise, this looks magnificent!

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The builds look great, but the 4th image, if those right side are pipes, i would suggest changing the material and to the 5th image, i would give that barrel or oil tank some more detail along with the crates? If that’s what it is. Overall they look amazing.

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