Hello guys, i’ve recently got interested in creating maps so I have decided to make one for my obby. Even though it is my first-ever map, it took around 1 month to make decent progress.
I know it isn’t on par with what you would typically find in simulator games, but I would like honest feedback with what I can work on and even any slight corrections is greatly appreciated.
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I’ve started learning to make the GUI buttons for the game, let me know how you think.
Here is the game link for you to roam around and criticize to your hearts content lol
Oh my gosh this is beautiful. A couple things though.
I think the fire could be more cartoony like the rest of the map
Also when going into the back teleporter it will put you in an infinite loop.
I don’t think the trees should be as shiny as they are.
Otherwise this is really cool!
Wow I have not thought about that, thanks alot! And yeah, I have been experiencing this loop for the past day or two but usually there was never an issue. edit: its fixed somehow
This is WAY too bright a little bit. The sky is a bit too cartoony and this place is too cartoony. Try subtracting the amount of lighting and try using music that could fit in with this map. I think you did a good job on this, but there are some things you need to fix.
Thanks for your feedback and yes, it doesn’t look well to have a free model (donation board) in the game. However, considering the amount of scripting and animations needed to create it makes it a bit overwhelming + average games with decent amount of players use these models so I’ve decided to stick with them too.
