Feedback on my map

Hello! I’ve been working on this map for a week now and would like to ask you what you think about it. If you find any bug feel free to share it, I will be very grateful to you! Also do you have any idea how I can name the map? I just can’t think of a good name :sweat_smile:
Thank you!

The map - For RTK v2 - Roblox

Some screenshots:

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Bro Its So Beautiful Who Design This Map Its A Good Designer

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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it!

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9/10 improvements in atmosphere needed

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Thank you for your feedback, but what can I fix in the atmosphere to improve it?

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It is kinda very foggy. Must change haze colour and value

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Looks pretty good. I like that there are two ways to get to the highest point on the map.
I’d suggest making the moon sculpture in the middle a fountain instead; no need to change the moon itself, but just adding some water and some particle effects could make it look more grand. Also, the staircase should end when it reaches it’s last exit. It looks kind of sloppy otherwise.

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I enjoyed exploring this map! This captures a more nostalgic feel of Roblox for me that I don’t see as often nowadays and I quite enjoyed it! I thought the layouts overall were fun and a bit abstract at times, this reminds me a bit of a hide and seek map. I think there are some minor improvements you can make, mostly relating to stairs/ladders accessibility;

For instance, this is a bit awkward in terms of execution and access; could you somehow turn the stairs towards the camera like this?

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Overall though I love the aesthetic and overall build, thanks for sharing :slight_smile:

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Thank you for your feedback! I love your idea with stairs, special thanks to you for that! :grinning:

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