Feedback on my map

So I tried using editor to make a map yesterday night just for fun to see if I can make a realistic setting like you see with other creators. I’m not really the builder of my group but it doesn’t hurt to try. I was aiming for a mountain side map once leaving a forest type of view.

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I didnt make the tree models though just the map

Just wanted to know how I did and what could be improved on.

Thanks in advance for the feedback.

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10/10 It looks great the detail is so good it just looks like a place where you come and chill. Keep it up. :star_struck: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :heart_eyes:

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It looks amazing! The only thing I would recommend is improving the lighting, overall the map looks dull. Maybe make it a bit brighter and add some more grass and bushes!

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Your map is pretty good! This map could be used for a simple showcase game if you added some lighting, so I’d suggest you to add that.

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Thank you for the feedback, Ill do my best!

The map looks amazing, well done!:grin::+1:

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Fair enough, ill try the map with more shading, thanks for the reply!

It looks awesome you really are a artist, I like how you’ve taken the pics l. The map is a paradise.:grin::relaxed:

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Thank you for the feedback, Ill take your advice!

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Thanks, ill see what can be done for the lighting.

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Thanks for the feedback :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thank you, I’m also trying to make gfx’s of this style so ill work hard on my art.

It is very dull, in my opinion, the pond looks a bit weird. On the subject of the pond, instead of using terrain as a rock, use some mesh instead. The height point imitating a stone looks odd. I’d change the terrain’s grass colour a bit, it does feel a bit out of place with the trees’ leaves. Also, I think it is odd for this kind of build to have an edge. While it is impossible to not have an edge of the map, you can illuminate the effect of an infinite terrain. Here is a video on it: How To Make Endless Terrain On Roblox - YouTube.

Lastly, the others has already pointed it out, but lighting needs improvement. To go into detail, I think better sunrays and color correction could elevate the place up. It feels like you have a bit of blur and bloom. In that case, also add fog of some sorts.

As you can see, there is a vague fog with dark-greenish-idk colour. A forest is the most beautiful in the morning or the evening, so have the environment revolve around that aspect if you’re planning to have the map be at the same time throughout the whole game.

The map looks overall empty, try adding animals, bushes, variety with trees and etc! Other from this harsh criticism, I think you did a very good job. You have got a bright future ahead of you so don’t give up no matter what.

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10/10 It looks pretty good but I recommend that you make props like bushes, signs, lanterns, etc.

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It looks very good, but it seems bland. It’s just terrain and lighting. Personally I suggest adding some flowers, along with just general nature to it so it gives it more life.

Overall, I would rate this a 7.5/10 due to what it’s missing.

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Thanks for the feedback, ill try to make changes to the map following your suggestions.

thanks you, ill do what I can to make the map more lively.

thanks for the feedback, I see that its kinda empty now with all the comments, ill add more to it.

No problem. I try to help where I can!

This looks very good. But a little bit less bright please.