I recently made this map for my game “The Forces”
(The Forces (NEW!) - Roblox)
The map is supposed to be an Earthquake map where the ground is unstable. Here are some screenshots that i took in Studio (Cause it is 2 player). I want to see what people think about the map.
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Hi, it looks pretty good you should make the lava look a little bit more realistic if that’s what it is.
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Okay, I will try to do that soon.
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Also if you using model’s that aren’t yours I would check them if I were you make sure they don’t contain a virus that could get you banned.
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All models in the build are mine besides for the lava, that i a free model but still i checked that.
Alright, good just letting you because I seen people banned because of that reason.
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The build’s lighting seems a bit flat. Since the build is a bit dark, I would recommend making the lava glow a bit, to add some realism. Overall, nice job! 
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Thanks, I will work on the lighting some more.
The layout looks good, aside from the fact that it’s pretty boring to look at.
Adding some decorations would make everything 100x better (Small Rocks, Bigger boulders, Burned down trees, etc.).
To make lava actually feel like well, lava. Change the material to Neon. You could also add particles for a nice looking smoke/fog or lava pops effect.
Good luck!
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Okay, sounds cool. That info will help me a lot thanks!
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You can make it neon but make sure also change brightness on the lava.
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Alright, I will do just that. Thanks!
You can also animate it using textures (Tween transparency of the texture using a script).
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I have no Idea how to do that.
Little Blocky but good !
30 charrs
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lol, true. It is a little blocky. Thanks for the feedback!
looks a bit plain in my opinion
you could make the lava neon material and probably use a texture with it, as well as some red lights that come from the lava
with that, you can make the place dark
you could also add some vines or hanging grass on some of the stones
other than that, very simple build
can’t really give any other feedback other than that since there’s nothing much else to see
keep building my friend!
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Good job! 
It looks nice, but I think it could use some improvement. The grass looks very flat and should have more depth.
The lava looks very red and still, I think it could use some texturing and lighting. Speaking of lighting, the scene looks very dark and would benefit greatly from having more lighting.
Also, the walls look very bland and are a solid texture. You could add some glowing ores coming out of the walls, fossils embedded into the walls, or whatever your heart desires!
Anyways, I think that the build is nice in the sense of gameplay, but it’s a bit plain in the sense of aesthetics. The grass could use some more natural stuff, like some trees or weeds.
I recommend you keep working on this build until you get something you are very proud of. Creativity’s the limit, my friend. 
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