Feedback on my medieval mansion/Manor

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#1

I will hopefully soon be creating a devlog of a new game I hope to be releasing. This is only a building from it.

What it originally was

Now if I add it all up, this would have taken me, probably around 1-3 days worth of time, but I made it over a period of a couple of weeks do to other things I have to do, games I have to update etc.

The part count for this building alone is 1, 196, Voxels: 37, 876, and Instances: 2, 220

Part Counter plugin count

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Here are some images of my build:

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Other Notes

Other Notes:
-Please mind the terrain, it was simply a test, and theres a 50/50 chance that I will actually use terrain around the building.
-Also please mind the back of the building, I put effort into it, but not as much as the roof, or the front. This is because when I make the game, the back will likely not be seen.

yeah i think thats it lol, also ive been building for a year ig

Please can you give me feedback! :slight_smile:

gl, Lightz

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What are you working on currently? (2022)
#2

I would suggest looking on Pinterest and searching medieval homes/towns for some more reference.

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here’s a good example.

Some advice I have on your mansion would be

  • make the roof thicker
  • reduce the amount of wood pillars, you put too much
  • window color change to black
  • instead of blue for the roof, brown wood could be better

Other than these your build looks nice

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#3

Definitely agree, pinterest references is the number one best way to create stuff.

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#4

Alright! Thank you I’ll take a look and see what I can do