It looks pretty good I must say!! However a flaw I have noticed (I don’t know if it’s intentional) is that there’s no background in particular. Despite having the subjects shown I feel like a background would add a nice touch.
really like how it’s looking and there’s a lot of potential for you as a GFX designer, however (I understand you want it to look a bit foggy) the the night vision green flashes are really standing out, not sure if that’s intentional.