I think I’m almost ready to start commissions. However, does anybody have some feedback? (It says jlenflo since that’s my Twitter username.)
Looks very good I like the top one u did good job you are a talented artist good job 
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The first one is… not great. Her legs are bending back I think and it looks like she has broken her legs and is calling for help from the ocean. She does not have a face, the lighting is wrong as its nighttime, the ocean looks like sand and it would not be this wavey at the docks & the dots that look like spraypaint looks like its from MS paint. The second one is better, but its like lighting in the grass…? The lighting looks incorrect here too. The drawings however are much better, though I’d change the ^w^ face in the first pic and the hands in the second. Fix the corrections & itll be way better
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The first one is very interesting, no face… and as Luxorz said
it’s very interesting… the 2nd on looks like the character is in mid air falling randomly in a sitting position.
The ones that are drawn look epic… but I have to be hard with you. I just think you need a little more practice and you’ll be gucci 
I don’t think you’re ready to open a commission, for the drawing ones, yes, but for the other ones, no. You just need more work into them and yea.
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