Feedback on my new game icon 2

Hello, again.

Thanks for giving feedback on my previous icon (for testing).

now I made a new icon for valiquest1 and valiquest2

:arrow_down_small: (I crossed out valiquest, I will remove it when VALIQUEST since this game will get a portal when the game is ready for players…)

:arrow_down_small: (The icon below is for the main game…)

Please tell me what should I add.

sorry for my very bad english lol.

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I really like the art style, but I think the first one’s text should all be the pencil font you have, as it looks out of place.

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(Post withdrawn by me cause I didn’t mean to reply to this topic.)

uh… i’m a bit perplex
why you crossed the valiquest the bottom
the top elements look smooth but the rest doesn’t, this is not very cohesive
I see the style of your image, maybe it’s clickbait but it’s a bit ugly lol

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I really like it, it looks savage.

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sorry for the confusion lol, my game is based of my past.

(I also edited the topic to remove a bit of confusion.)

Ok ill try changing it real quick lol

I think you should keep the fonts of the texts consistent, I think it would look a lot neater that way! :slight_smile:

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Thank you, @SomeoneIsAGoat & @cuppateaandabikky.

I tried to follow your tips, and here is the result.

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