Hello, I just finished my first full obby. I would love some feedback so I can continue to improve and get better. Here is the game: The Gauntlet(End Screen) - Roblox
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I enjoyed your obby! I would hire a gfx designer if your game becomes popular! Otherwise, well done!
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Cool obby my friend, the only thing I noticed was when going to a checkpoint there is a star on top of it, I think if you added a collect animation for that, it would look quite cool! 
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Great game! I can’t believe it, really hard work and effort for that! I know a future for you, you could get 100k place visits with that kind of game!
Anyways, i have two things that i need to tell you to get some place visits.
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Advertising. Where do i advertise? The most efficient and cheapest advertising is in the roblox game, Game Tracker. It’s cheaper than advertising in the roblox website i think, i don’t remember. You can advertise in the roblox website also if you want. But anyways, here is the link for Game Tracker: Game Tracker - Roblox
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Fix the teleporters. It’s sometimes bugged you know. And it’s kinda annoying hehe. Still it’s a really good game!
Thanks for hearing my post here. Keep up with the really amazing work!
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By the way, I fixed the teleporters. Also, planning on doing a midieval theme. Thanks for the feedback!
First off the music is pretty good, but it can be annoying after a while since it’s on repeat. The obby’s okay, but there were a lot of things I saw that were off.
When I 1st joined the game, I was spawned by a portal and I saw no spawn point. I wasn’t spawned in the middle of the spawn section at all, so maybe you should fix that. I also saw there were some stage spawn points that weren’t centered correctly. I also saw some parts that were randomly floating in the obby which made is easier for me to get across. I also noticed that when you die, the music restarts to where it originally started so it gets repetitive really quickly. Another problem I experienced was the lack of testing the obby, I don’t know if this is even complete-able , I don’t know what stage I was on, so I can’t really tell you which part it was.
Here are some of my screenshots below
Yes, I saw that that wasn’t possible. Ill make sure to fix this. I’m also planning on adding a progress bar.
It feels very messy. I played it until I got to the point where someone already mentioned it wasn’t possible. and I could tell right away that a lot of it was just free models. I would recommend getting rid of the free models ASAP. It makes the game feel very cheap. Also to prevent levels being impossible, before publishing your game to ROBLOX I would press the test button and test the whole game yourself to make sure its possible.
Things I noticed:
Music- restarts after respawn of character
Music- doesn’t fade in or out, just changes to next song
Conveyor belt-
can see a yellow tab at the end
General levels-
Fix previously before mentioned impossible brick jump
some bricks are just “slapped” on there meaning they aren’t level or off center.
Thumbnail-
I would personally spend some time learning GFX or hiring someone to make a thumbnail.
Other than that, It has potential. Good luck!
Thank you, what are the free models I should get rid of?
as of right now, I would focus on these:
-the spawn “teleporter” thing whatever that blue structure is
-whatever model is making the “would you like to buy this jump pad” prompt appear when playing.
-the conveyor belt has yellow parts at the end of them that I would remove, or learn how to script your own conveyor belt.
other suggestions:
different music player or look up tutorials on how to make your own.
teleporters, instead of bricks make them an actual shape, maybe have some text that says teleport
playtest your game before publishing so players don’t run into issues preventing them from playing.
But, in the long run you should have little to no free models because like I said above, it feels cheap and makes it feel like the owner of the game didn’t try very hard.
By the way, I scripted that conveyor belt and the teleporters. Those yellow things on the sides are necessary for it to work. But, I will remove the jump pad, change out the start spawn, and customize my teleporters.
Also, I just removed 90% of free models. Try it out now. I don’t receive the jump pad prompt, so can you guys tell me if its still there?