Feedback on my new game

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#1

Could I get some feedback on my new tycoon? (I used a tycoon kit)
https://www.roblox.com/games/403644/Skyscraper-Tycoon
Not really new lol I made it in like 2008 I just updated the textures and stuff to make it better

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#2

thank you all who actually give feedback, it helps me improve!

#3

I think it’s a bit too big and simple looking. Adding more variants of nature assets, etc would make it look much better. I highly recommend using references of other games even or from Pinterest to get inspiration.

#4

You have a good concept here, this could really be turned into something. One of the very first things you should do is add a DataStore. This is very important. People will play (assuming they haven’t read the description) and get a good skyscraper going, they’re gonna want to come back and continue with it. If it doesn’t save, said player probably won’t come back.

EDIT: The thumbnail is really really good tho :+1:

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#5

Thanks! I will get right down to work on it!

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#6

Rightㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

#7

Looks pretty basic like the standard tycoon kit but I’d say it’s fun. The sounds from other players also do sound for you which is a bit annoying though.

#8

I tried to fix it its kinda hard to fix but aight thanks :smiley:

#9

Now, How can i make it popular?

#10

Probably modifying the generic aspects of it such as the dropper models and (trying to) remove every free model.

#11

There are no free models, and is there a way to get it advertised?

#12

Yeah you can advertise your way through sponsorships and ads but that is a WHOLE new ball game, I advise to make sure your game is the best it can be and get testers before you put your game out there

#13

Yeah, alright! Thanksㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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#14

Thank yall for your ideas!ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

#15

i have gotten a lot of people saying they like it

#16

i need to add more detail thats a thing I need to do

#17

i added some more natureㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

#18

just added more floorsㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

#19

Im gonna try an add a data save thingie

#20

it was made so long ago that some of the things are outdated i just updated it