Hello! I made this gfx for Pastriez. I didn’t have any comms so I made a fan art!
I just need feedback. Please write here, what do you think about it! I’m trying to do something new now and I really need your advices. Lastely, I got 2 comms and I didn’t get payment from them. I hope that they’ll pay for it soon! 
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Very Cute!!! I love the colors and literally everything is on point great job !!
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Thank you! You made first reply to me! Because it’s my first post here!
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Your Welcome hahah Also welcome to the Community! 
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Wow! This looks great! 10/10 
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Hello,
This is awesome! There’s nothing much you need to add, this is outstanding! Awesome work. If I had feedback it might be add more shadow. Overall this looks great!
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It is very good I like the style idk why.
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Woww! This is amazing! I love it! Amazing job! Keep up this amazing work and can’t wait to see more!
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The scene looks kind of a bit too “perfect” meaning that it doesn’t look realistic because of how little imperfections there are in the materials.
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Wow! That looks amazing!! The way everything has been set out, the scene flows really well!
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Que buenas imagen los colores que elegiste están bien combinados.
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What a nice image, the colors you chose are well combined.
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Some winds in the raw render where the donuts are would look really good.
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Looks great! But I don’t think that the people will pay you if you are still waiting for it. You should always ask for the payment before giving the art.
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I didn’t send them their gfx! Only with a big waternark!
Wow! I’m actually surprised, this looks great! 
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Hm.
The guy is committing 4th wall break, everyone is stiff too.
Way too stiff, it looks good but it needs some fluidity.
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Wdym? How can I add “some fluidity”?
I was trying to add materials and I have them very much but Idk why on render there aren’t any of them!
You mean shadow in Photoshop? Or in Blender? (if in Blender than idk how to add it)
I’m not really a GFX person so I don’t know. It seems too rigid.
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