Feedback on my new GFX!

Hello! This is my new gfx! I had a comm for a thumbnail and an icon for a game.
What do you think about it? What can I add / change to a thumbnail / icon?
After your feedback I’ll try to fix my mistakes and try to do GFX better!

Here is the GFX!



Waiting for your feedback! :smiley:

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Damn Thats so dope! I like it so much

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Woah, it’s really dope and nice.

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It looks amazing! The only improvements I would say is the lighting on the avatars, at least on the last one. Maybe look for a different font too but otherwise good!

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Thanks! I was trying to change the lightning so there are 2 variants of the thumbnail.
I still don’t know where o put lightning so it would look better!

Hello, there I have some suggestions that you may want to use as improvement at GFX.
Change some font and colours.

Change the lighting of the GFX using a camera raw filter if you use photoshop.

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Add more bends to the characters limbs cause in my opinion the characters kinda look like they are saying Hello, and the guy isn’t bending far enough I don’t think to reach the phone.
But anyway, the whole GFX is nice it looks good, so yea you don’t have to change things if you don’t want to.

Wow! The best feedback I ever had!
But I have some questions.

  1. How to make the guy bending enough to take the phone?
  2. How to make more bends? I already tried to make many bends so I thought it was alright.

2 things

1: I think it looks a bit bright and saturated

2: The text could do with a little bit of work
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the blue doesn’t really go well with the green imo, and on the orange text the top bit it lighter while on the blue text the top bit is darker

other than that it is very good, keep it up! :slight_smile:

Thanks for feedback!

Tbh, I wanted to do all the text yellow, but the owner of thegame wanted me to do it blue so I had no choise!

How to fix light and saturation?

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probably just going to the settings for the lighting and toning the brightness down for it a bit, or changing the colour of the lighting to a more white hue

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If you are going for cartoony, I recommend ToonKit for blender

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K, thanks for feedback! :smiley:

Wdym? How can I do that in Blender?

It’s very cool. I like it very much.

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search it up, its a plugin for blender

I feel like the excessive amount of accessories on the character in the icon are taking away from the GFX. Apart from this there isn’t much wrong with it!

gotta love the saturationScreen Shot 2021-04-18 at 4.00.18 PM
quite a few errors.
also lol the way they hold the phone looks weird.
and the background is clear that’s its a background and you can even see the shadows on the background bruhhhScreen Shot 2021-04-18 at 4.00.53 PM
anyways, nice gfx, 65/100.

Why is the dominus metal? It is kinda unnerving to me.

I wanted to add materials, I don’t think that’s bad.

  1. How to fix the holding of the phone?
  2. I didn’t wuite uderstand you. “The background Is clear but you can see shadows on it”? Wdym?