Hello! I just came back from a little GFX break. This is the first GFX I have made in a while. Any feedback on it?
I tried to make it as unique as I could.
(and yes I know the bears arm is cutting through the girls I will fix it eventually)
I tried to make it as unique as I could.
(and yes I know the bears arm is cutting through the girls I will fix it eventually)
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The gfx is great overall but id recommend putting some trousers on the girl in the gfx
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She is wearing denim shorts…they are not really visible so I should probably re-do it with her wearing some jeans 
LOL, yeah it doesnt look like she has pants on 
Looks great! I love how it really looks like it would be a Roblox room. Everything in the right style.
Tips:
The lighting could be a bit better there are some odd shadows and very sharp ones.
Maybe use a fill light and or move the main light a little bit.
(And this is just me being an absolute perfectionist) I would redo the face in photoshop since it’s very low resolution, but this is not needed and just if you really wanted to push it.
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I would suggest adding some textures to the pillows and the scene since it just looks like a couple blocks recolored. I also suggest adding more particles to the carpet since right now it just looks like grass. The lighting makes absolutely no sense, theres sunrays coming from the top left but it looks very dark and theres a lot of light on the right but doesn’t seem to have a window or cast any light onto the character
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Hello,
i suggest you to add lightnings which highlights the character as you see her face is bit dark
anyways you did a great job
Regards
Tom
It is dark but I think it’s the style.
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It’s a great GFX, but i think you should add visible shorts to girl. I am not a designer so i don’t know much about it. But it looks great!
Damn 
Looks very good , I don’t see any demerit in this.
Lightining - 10/10
Overall quality - 10/10
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