Hello, I made this logo for practice, I would like you to give it some feedback
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I dont personally like the blue outline
I just think there is too much outline, try lowering that
It looks great! I would just reconsider outlines. Maybe try and fit an icon with the text too.
For the Alfred’s Part of the logo, don’t use a straight line color difference use a gradient for the colors. For example, I made one here for a commision before >
I love it, but I think a little more to the background would ‘spice things up’ a bit. Maybe just a roblox photo of a Bakery.
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Ye lol i always make THICC outlines
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I will try to apply that!mmmmm
I personally think it would look much better without the blue outline, other than that, it’s pretty good!
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The outline is kinda weird!
But I like this.
What software did you use to make this?
The outline around the letters is way to big. Lower that and it will help out your piece.
Alright, so I’m going to be pretty blunt:
I don’t think the style of the logo really fits the context of what it’s for?
Why the stark contrast of cyan/white/black? Why the really thick black outlines on the text? Nothing about it really says that it would be a logo for a bakery to me outside of maybe the typefaces used?
To put this into perspective, just try searching up bakery logos. Most of what you’ll find will have design aspects that fit what their target market would probably look for from a bakery. This however just doesn’t really seem like it would work if you ask me.
That’s actually pretty good. It could use some more detail in the background instead of being plain, but overall the logo is a 9/10.