So I would like feedback on my new map. I made it myself, without the toolbox or anything else. I know the thumbnail is not original, but that is because I don’t know how to make one. I would like feedback on how it can be improved.
You earn badges when you visit the volcano, mountain, etc. I tried to make the map colorful and visually appealing.
The game is a tycoon
Game link: Beach Hotel Tycoon🐚🏖️ ☀️🌴Beach House Tycoon - Roblox
Hey, i’ll be really honest with you, theres a few things you should really change.
Firstly, the ‘touch to play escape obby’ teleporter looks extremely out of place and it does not look good in my opinion. Also the excessive amount of particles.
I feel like the usage of materials is a bit weird, the roblox brick texture around the bushes is really and the random things that have textures and others that don’t. You should work on that.
I also feel like adding variations of fences and adding bushes would make your map look way better. Also the random sunbeds and parasols look kinda weird in my opinion.
I really like the palm tree models though, and the lampposts and the fences are good too.
Oh and for the bushes I think you should either make the berries blocky too or make the bush itself less square.
I hope you can do something with this feedback.
– sam
omg thanks alot i will try that
Also I think you should consider settling to 1 building style. Currently theres blocky low poly, blender model low poly and things with materials which kind of makes it a mess.