Hi guys i hope you are doing well
while ago i have made my first shirt → Cheezburger shirt
and today i have published 2 more shirts and i really need your feedback on how i can improve my up coming classic clothing
the first one is the Sparkle time red shirt a smart looking shirt inspired by the red sparkle time fedora
any purchase/feedback will be appreciated , thank you for reading.
Why the sparkle red time shirt has an cursed image , Are this the texture of the hat? Used for an Roblox Classic Shirt?
it’s looks simple try add some shadded! it’s will be cool trust
example about shadded
and add more details
example
these little things will make your shirt look amazing but please make the colors fit
and shirts need to have reason why you adding this for example
For example, if her shirt is narrow, it is because it’s made only for roblox girl torso to make it elegant and appropriate.
and that why this shirt having a narrow waist.
i don’t really know why you add a white lines in the red shirt?
and like i said please add shadded 
this is my feedback i hope i help you with it 
well yeah i took the actual texture and transformed it into a shirt
i because the actual red sparkle time fedora has a white line , i have tried to add shading to the shirt of domino , if you look at the shirt closely you can see that there is some dark spots and for the sparkle red time fedora i felt like that it does not really need shading because it should look bright and cool to match the actual fedora
guys i still need feedback to improve my next shirts
If I owned the domino crown, I’d definitely buy that shirt.
So if anyone wants to give me the funds for a domino crown, I will also buy that shirt.
lol
Yeah, but it just doesn’t look good like that, you need to add an element of creative design and design a new design yourself that matches pretty close to that of the fedora
after gathering feedback on both shirts it seems like the shirt of domino is better than the sparkle time red shirt , so how do you think i can improve my up coming shirts ?
Add some shadows, you can also add a textile texture over the shirt to add some realism, and add borders
can you tell me how to add shadows and a textile texture to the shirt please ?
These shirts look good! Great job on them! Will you make more? How long did these take to make?
For the shading, you can google a template (that has a transparent background), and add it onto your shirt template and make sure it’s not too strong.
You can reduce opacity so that it doesn’t look sweaty.
For the textile texture, you can search for a white textile fabric texture, add it onto your shirt and also reduce opacity by a lot.
Remember to remove the shading and the textile texture over the hands and the neck!
thank you , i am not sure if i am going to make more since i did not even get my robux back , the shirt of domino one took me 3 hour and the sparkle time red shirt took me like 2 hours
is there is a way to create these textures instead of taking them from google ?
You can try taking a zoomed picture of white clothing on a bright surface and use a tool online to make it a texture, my personal favourite one is this one
For the shading, i have no idea how to make it lol
Don’t let that be the factor demotivating you, my own clothing group, Craft Designs - Roblox, for the first few weeks had no sales, but then it gradually begun to take off and I’m now getting a reasonable amount of sales per week and have gotten back what I had invested.
You have to keep trying and testing new designs to see how it works in the market. For my own group, I had a lot of different designs, then I made my Fire design which took off and got and is getting a lot of sales.
