hello, this is my new upcoming game called “Baconey’s Adventures”, i would love to hear your guys feedback on it and what i can do to improve it!
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I love that cinematic
But how the Earth glows at night???
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by using a mesh with a texture and making a another mesh part a yellow glowing part under it
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You should tell everyone more about what the game is about?
(If you want the correct feedback)
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Looking great! I would suggest a rethink on the loading screen since the GUI doesn’t fit correctly on the screen.
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i’ve tried, but it keeps messing with me and it’s annoying
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Well Roblox intentionally does this from the phone screen where the camera cutouts are, I think you need to set the background to the size of {1, 0},{1, 0} to fix this. Great game btw!
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ah ok thanks, it does the same on pc can i keep replying to you and let you know how it goes?
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fixed the issue, gonna rework the starter gui it looks a bit plain
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about the gui thing, maybe this plugin can help you
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oh, i already have this plugin but i did manage to fix the issue. thanks tho!
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I absolutely love this lol. The comedic entrance was gold lol.
My only complaint would be the sound of the dialogue. Maybe make it a little softer?
Idk I dont do sound design lol.
Other than that nice work! Cant wait to see what this becomes!
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I liked it, it has potential.
Supposing that this is the very start of the game, I would tell you to add more “character” to the dialogues. I know im not a scriptwriting somelier but Im supposing these two are friends, i think, so you should make them chat more like friends?
For example: “Yo {username}, check this out!” or something like that. And add music to the dialogue with baconey. Please music is life.
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thanks lol, tried to make it funny by just like him being like “um why did you do that?”, i am not good at sound design so i got it off the toolbox. i appreciate this tho
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i’ll see what i can do about the music part, i might not add it im not sure and maybe give it more character, ill look into that. thanks for your feedback!
forgot to reply to you but, the game is basically about you and your really silly friend, baconey traveling around the globe and trying to get back to his house after the portal malfunctioned. i might add some cool battles, you’ll have to see the next topic i post about the game.
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