Feedback on my new "vibe" game

I have made a new game, and I would like some feedback on it. It is called Vibe library.
Please bare in mind that some animations don’t work properly yet. Also can somebody suggest a good editing program (free) to use for thumbnails.

Also there are some secrets for you to find.

The game - (5) Vibe Library - Roblox

Final thing - Can anybody suggest how much robux I should put into promoting the game and if I should sponsor or advertise.

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Looks good. Maybe try getting a better game icon. And some gamepasses.

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Thanks, But as I have already mentioned above, I don’t have anything to edit my game icons with. Can you suggest one? (free.)

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WOW not bad maybe let the books be readable other than that its great!

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Your game looks just fine considering its new, but I have a few suggestions.

  • For starters, there is a lot of open space, try to fill in some gaps (but don’t make it too cluttered)

  • In-Game screenshots are fine for the icon and thumbnail but make sure you crop them as well. A good idea is to take screenshots in Roblox studio so you can position characters however you want.

  • When you can, add more music to make the game feel more vibrant

  • I would usually say a bedroom is out of place in a library, but if you can find a way to fill the bedroom with more objects (especially small qol things such as lamps, nightstands, smaller bookshelves, etc.) then it would probably look better

  • The lighting is a little bit inconsistent but it looks fine

  • And my final suggestion is to take advantage of textures! Textures and colors will give your game more life :slight_smile:

Your game looks great and i’m rooting for you! Good luck!

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The bedroom is there for a reason. :shushing_face:
Also I’m not entirely sure how to use textures properly since I have trouble with that. Also can you suggest any gamepass ideas?

Hello there! Since the game is so nice and chill, i decided to design an icon/thumbnail you can use:Vibe
No need to attribute me or anything! Enjoy! :heart: :cookie:

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Oh my goodness, It looks absolutely AMAZING!!! Am I allowed to use it for the game thumbnail? Also what photo editor did you use?

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The idea itself is nice, maybe work on more variety? I can see it evolving no problem.

To take better screen pictures you can also use windows+shift+s
Like this

It’s usually a pretty cool idea to show off the thumbnails with in game pictures.

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Hi there! Thanks for the feedback. I am actually using Pixlr for my graphic designs, but more advanced developers may use more complicated tools! :heart:

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From the top of my head, some good gamepass ideas could include

VIP which gives you access to a certain room

Emotes gamepass

Maybe even chat bubble colors

In a vibe game, anything that just makes the player look cool is an acceptable gamepass.

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Ok, Will defiantly work on Vip and Emotes, thanks for the ideas :wink:

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First of all the books are way too simple and most of them are floating

The chairs and Tables are too big

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The door is pretty undetailed and maybe too big

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Thanks for the feedback, I’m working on fixing those things right now. Also walking through that door may take you somewhere…

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I recommend Using paint.net that’s what I use

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I use paint.net, gimp is presumably better then it but I don’t understand how to use it

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The couch is pretty thin and Undetailed and also a lot of the objects are floating

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And this room is quite empty


but it’s still a solid build
and the tables are quite disproportionated

oh and i reccomend using gap fills

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Hello there. I see that you need a thumbnail so I made a quick thumbnail for you to use!

I also used the same free software as @Kostiskat

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Woah, looks good, only problem it looks nothing like my game.

Wait what is “humangirl” I didnt put that there Also bare in mind this is my first time properly building so there is bound to be mistakes.

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