Put the sound on
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Very nice, I love the sound hahaha!
Also epick background music I love it.
Maybe improve the gui with less transparency and change it’s position.
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I think it is a good UI but like @uhi_o put above this the UI could be a little more detailed. You could always add a picture of the NPC on the UI. I do like the music as well. 
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You shouldn’t take other’s work.
The background music is “sans.” from Undertale, and the text beeps are also the sounds that a character from Undertale, Sans, makes when talking. Not the most original.
N̶o̶t̶ ̶o̶n̶l̶y̶,̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶p̶h̶r̶a̶s̶e̶ ̶"̶H̶e̶l̶l̶o̶,̶ ̶W̶e̶l̶c̶o̶m̶e̶"̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶4̶ ̶s̶y̶l̶l̶a̶b̶l̶e̶s̶,̶ ̶y̶e̶t̶ ̶w̶e̶ ̶h̶e̶a̶r̶ ̶a̶b̶o̶u̶t̶ ̶1̶0̶ ̶b̶e̶e̶p̶s̶.̶ ̶S̶e̶e̶m̶s̶ ̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶j̶u̶s̶t̶ ̶r̶i̶p̶p̶e̶d̶ ̶a̶ ̶s̶o̶u̶n̶d̶ ̶f̶i̶l̶e̶ ̶o̶f̶f̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶U̶n̶d̶e̶r̶t̶a̶l̶e̶.̶
Third, it should be “Hello, welcome.” not “Hello, Welcome” as any word after the first word shouldn’t be capitalized, and there should always be a period.
The GUI is also not centered. It would also be nice to have the NPC’s face on the text bubble. At the moment it’s just a transparent gray box with text on top. Needs detailing.
TL;DR: Use your own music, SFX, fix your grammar, and center your text.
If you really want to use Toby’s work, at least credit him for it.
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Wow dude i was just messing around with undertale sfx beside that thank you for your feedback i will try to improve that
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You clearly know that this is from Undertale, yet you don’t understand that the game plays a noise each letter?
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Very nice, although it would be super cool if the chat text instead of “Hello, welcome” could be something a bit more casual, like “Hey there, welcome” or “Hi [username], welcome!”
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