Feedback on my npc talk System!


Any feedback?

Overall it looks great and simple, Only complaint I have is that the text looks a bit out of place. Centering would be nice, but it is good!

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It looks really simple but I still like it. It most of took a little bit of time to make it.
I’m giving it a 8/10

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Did you meant simple to make ?

Text looks pretty simple so i’d give it a 8.5/10

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It looks cool! Making an NPC/AI system is not a very simple thing.
It kinda needs a lot of lines of code you know.
So yeah overall, 9/10.

Yes I did mean that. charlimit

Looks great, though I prefer dark mode

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I don’t think it’s an AI… I think it just displays a GUI when a ProximityPrompt is triggered.

The way you did this is very inefficient and takes a lot of time. I would have used string.sub to cut off parts of the string and then gradually add on more of the string by cutting off less, but you literally typed each string:

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Like woah. Pretty inefficient and it would take forever if you wanted to add another dialogue text.
Also :WaitForChild on EACH ONE? That just slows the script down. Just declare that frame once as a variable then just reference that variable.

Hey remove this. You leaked the script. It’s not scripting support

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It’s not a big script that’s “OMG U LEAKED IT”. If anything it’s good to “leak” scripts as it helps people to learn how to code. And I’m just showing you your own code so you can revise it and look over it

I’ve never showed it HERE. You can’t basically show the script here . OF COURSE , you could do it via dms here. BUT NOT here

7/10

This looks great and I’m amazed at the fact how your UI design has changed over 8 months.

Your Username Tracker Game was a poorly UI designed but very cool game but the fact that you have turned your UI work into this amazes me.

Good luck on future UI work and maybe try making the text fit the whole box.