Hello fellow devs! I’ve created a very simple obby game and was looking for your feedbacks! All feedbacks will be accepted!
here is the link to my obby game.
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https://gyazo.com/b5776972f2464e6d16b8241b3076941d This is Impossible to jump I am not sure if there is a part and you forgot to anchor it! Other wise this is a very well made game and I like the rainbow Sky Blocks.
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Looks real great, but the first level is impossible to do because there is a long jump.
Yes, there is a very long jump at the start.
The game is too short to judge fully since it lacks flair. Since it’s quite generic I can’t really see such a game going far. I’d recommend adding a unique theme to the whole game to make it interesting.
There’s nothing too interesting about the skybox; it’s been pulled from the toolbox for loads of obbies. To improve this I’d recommend basing the skybox around the theme I stated before. You can also see the sun through the skybox which was probably unintentional.
The jumps are also very difficult for the first stage - there’s also an enormous gap which cannot be jumped across so I can’t test the rest of the obby. The second part is unaligned when compared to the first and the third part. The first three parts are all unaligned when compared to the last parts. One of the most important parts of making an obby is to test the stages as you make them; you need to make sure they’re possible and they feel either simple or difficult depending on how far in the obby the stages. It’d be ideal if you did this before sharing it in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations so we can at least test the entire thing.
The particles are also very basic; having smoke and sparkles in your face when you join is quite annoying since the first thing you want to see when you join is the map, not some smoke. You’ve also used the default particle behind; all three of these also seem out of place since they don’t follow your rainbow theme at all.
Collisions between players are also enabled; this would likely cause problems should multiple people play the obby as they can push each other off or just be annoying.
Here I’m just mainly critiquing the building - if you were interested in making this a proper game, there would be various other points to consider in addition to what I’ve said.
Thx for the advice, I will fix it.