So, i just made a pretty basic obby with some new things i’ve never tried before. It would help me a lot if someone could give me feedback on the overall game.
https://www.roblox.com/games/4769306265/Calm-No-Stage-Parkcor-Obby-Alpha
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It’s good, but you spelt parkour wrong. It also needs more design/detail.
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It’s not bad but it’s really basic. On some of the stages you aren’t even required to jump and can just walk through. Consider adding parts that kill the player if they don’t jump at the right time and add different amounts of spacing to each part to make it harder. It needs more variety and make sure to check the spelling of your game title (Parkour*)
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Wow… I feel so stupid! I rushed it, i cant believe i didn’t notice. Thanks for telling me
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No worries, everyone makes mistakes.
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Feedback;
here is a picture of me when I re-spawned. I clicked “Play” again and my entire game went blurly. The obby is quiet good but basic as well, really simple. I believe you can make it better
Edit: needed to fix grammar.
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I think it would add an extra “pop” to the game if you made the edges beveled
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Could you provide some pictures to the others who can’t join?
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Good,but need more detail and more orriginality, too simple.
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Heya! Loving what you’ve gotten done here so far, what I’d suggest you do overall is think about what could bring players back? How could you possibly implement a level system? Maybe a new level system? This is all up to you, good luck!
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Hey its nice for now, but I suggest tweening the part when you click the play button like, this: And I wan’t to say that you did a really good job with the Low-Poly trees 
local Play = script.Parent
local Blur = game.Lighting.Blur
local Pos = -- Position you wan't to tween it
local TweenService = game:GetServce("TweenService")
function Tween(TweenService)
script.Parent:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(Pos), "In", "Quad", 0.7)
end
Play.MouseButton1Click:Connect(Tween)
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I played your obby I can say it looks pretty basic and doesn’t have that much detail to it, I would give a couple of suggestions that could improve your obby.
The Obby is quite good. But it’s pretty basic in my opinion I would consider adding some parts that kill players such as moving platforms and other I would try spacing the parts out a bit more so it could make the obby look more challenging/harder you could possibly add more obstacles so players won’t just get to the end that easy.
Overall, there’s not that much to say about your obby, i did enjoy it, but I would make it look way better. I would create a obby that will be interesting, be creative. Build unique courses instead of basic lava checkers and truss courses. Add decorations and little details.
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