So I made this obby called Island Jumps, fairly quickly so there aren’t that many details. I don’t really know what details to add lol. Here is a vid of my doing the obby:
Note: All blue (water) will teleport you to the beginning.
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I like it a lot, but are you going for realism? If you are, I’d recommend adding more things such as trees. And for the neo jumps, consider making them cliffs or walls made of palm tree trunks. 
The blue “things” that you’re supposed to avoid, what is that? If it’s water that doesn’t make much sense. Consider changing that.
Anyways I hope this helped. Good job 
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I love the concept, this is something original, a really nice work with that video.
Very well done!
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Looks pretty good!
Here are my only suggestions:
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The map itself looks quite plane, maybe add trees or walls
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I think it would also look really cool if you added like a fish or something in the water
But other than that, I think it looks pretty good!
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Looks fun to play! add some palm trees, and more details like particles or something.
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It looks okay, though I think that the wraparounds could be a lot larger, since more skilled obby players can do around 10 stud wraparounds or longer, so it would at least add to the difficulty. you could even do stickouts on the wraparound to make it more interesting.
another thing i have to critique is the overall repetitiveness of the jumps. i find a lot of obstacle courses to fail in terms of variety, as a large majority of them usually just repeat the same jump over and over again. theres no substance, and at times it just makes it a lot more boring and monotonous. although this is remedied by the tidal wave that comes in constantly, it still barely adds anything new to the table.
sometimes the buildings look a bit plain, and so does the overall environment. adding props such as islands, clouds, palm trees, ships, rocks, etc. can really make it feel more like of cohesive place and have a lot more life put into it, if that makes any sense.
all in all, its a pretty nice obby, though there will always be room for improvement. regardless, good luck on your obby game.
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Maybe remove the free models (I’m pretty sure the sign is a free model.)
Add a decal/texture to make the water more realistic, or make it a little transparent.
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I worked on it a bit more. Also, do you know any water textures that would actually look good?
(I’m still working on the first obstacles, that is why you don’t see them in the screenshots).
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It’s like a speed run 4 type of game but so really love the idea here. I see people on YouTube speed running these type of games and it’s awesome. Good luck :D.
Nice job!
I’m looking forward to play it if you ever plan to make it public
It’s great! Make sure add trees and other small details you can also try animating the wave, 8/10.
Not sure any good water textures. I also suggest turning the palm trees around because it looks just copy & pasted.
Looks pretty fun! I’ve never seen an obby game with this kind of concept before, good job!
I like the concept! I’d change the lighting, and if you plan on making it public, you should add a running animation.
I like it, it’s original. How did you make the CFrame for the water?
i love the concept of the water and how like ypu have to dodge waves!! good job
Cartoon style obby games and simple obby games are things that have always appealed to me on ROBLOX. This looks like a lot of fun!
The end could have a bit more to it though, something a bit more exciting or challenging to finish the obby. Some sort of dramatic area (doesn’t have to be massive) would be really cool and would conclude this course really well.
This looks like a lot of fun and I think players will love this if it’s released to play publicly.
Great job!
These cartoony movie/series adventure obbies really put the icing on my cake!
I really like how this is a regular old speedrun obby, but you made some cool tidal waves that you have to jump over, which is more or less of a lava spinner, very creative with that part.
The only thing I would recommend is toying around with skyboxes, suns, day and nighttime, and that type of object.
Overall, it is amazing.
Nice game, not so nice name. The name is pretty generic in my opinion - sounds like what I would have named a game 3 years ago (I wasn’t the best at naming games back then).