Feedback on my Padded Room GFX

I made this as part of a comission, what do you think about it or what could i improve on?

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It looks really good! However, the character positioning seems off. For it being so realistic, the way his limbs float off his body takes away from that (specifically in the first image). I am definitely not a 3D modeler, but try utilizing curves more? You might also want to change the bedsheets to a slightly different color (you could do grey, orange, whatever. Just something to seperate it, as it blends in a bit too much) Other than that, it looks really good. I enjoyed looking at it!

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Thanks, i will try to variate colors and for the limbs, i tried to make it r15 but i couldnt do it because it was a custom character instead of an actual player.

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Like what Infinite_Visions said, the arms and legs look a bit strange. Maybe play around a bit more with them. Other than that, it looks cool!

The only problem for me is the legs, since this is a realistic project, you have to make it realistic with the character. The legs look like they aren’t connected to the character in most angles. In blender it’s really easy to bend the legs in a more curvy shape and connect the legs to the actual torso, and most rooms like this don’t really offer beds so maybe putting the person in the corner scared and freighted would give the vibe of an insane person locked up in a padded room.

It looks like an insane asylum I don’t know if that was the goal , which it looks like it is, but all in all you did a great job. I can’t really give you advise because I am not a 3D modeller, so I don’t know the expectations or whats good or bad.

That’s actually fire I never seen anyone do something like this in roblox, keep up the great work as of right now ion see any problem except for the lighting it’s a little too bright but a few adjustments & it will be fine!

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