I’m a clothing designer, but about a month ago, I wanted to make my own obby with the knowledge I got from many different sources. I took my time, and wanted to add more parts into the game. Took me about a couple of hours.
One thing for sure you need to add is Can Collide false for the players. It gets annoying because they can mess you up. A thing I like is that you have a creative name for each stage! Overall it is pretty good considering you are a clothing designer.
I played a little bit,and its good!
But i think you should add something different,like Interactive parts.(try to find which part you have to click,for example)