Feedback on my pillar

Hello,
can u tell me about the pillar I have finished for the month of the RDC2020
But first, I want to tell you something is it looking cool when I just want to look at the pillar at the game and also I cannot send any picture in this “Building support”. Can you help instruction to send any picture in any category on this dev forum website?

the for the help here some game id you need to see:

thanx for the help and I will send a new topic very soon…and I hope you guys have wonderful day.

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Can you please give a a screenshot for people who can’t join the game atm?

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sorry, maybe soon I will put a picture of the progress and also the detail about this feedback.
I hope you understand and I m so so sorry about the issue here

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For those who can’t join, here you go:

It’s basically an RDC 2020 pillar.

I think there is an overuse of neon on the pillar. Set the color to light gray instead of white.

This pillar is okay, but there isn’t much decoration to it.

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It’s pretty cool, not much you can do with it honestly. Other than decreasing the neon a bit, maybe you could give each of the roblox logos at the bottom different rotation? also try adding some stuff to the sides and back as well, that might help make it look a bit better :slight_smile:

Great job!

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The pillar has a nice touch, and I like the looks! I can try suggesting adding color gradient at the background and decorations. It might be great to see how it’ll look like!

Keep up the good progress. :+1:

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Feedback

I believe that the neon material you have selected for the Roblox Logo you have delicately placed on your pillar are much to bright. I can distinguish that it is the Roblox Logo; however, I highly suggest you attempt to diminish the effect of the neon material.

The pillar is a rectangle with neon Roblox Logos and “RDC20” on it.

I suggest adding a fade. Making the colour become gradially lighter would be a good addition. To be specific, it will be dark at the bottom and the colouring of the pillar will slowly get lighter as it goes up. Again, this is just a thought.

I suggest making the bottom the the pillar thicker.

Hey @RISING_ROBLOX the pillar is nice! It has a great design and all, but I do have a few things I would like to point out:

1 | Bloom

A lot of people forget to add this, especially when they develop neon parts. Use a bloom! If you are unaware, bloom can alter the neon parts of your game, in fact all of them. They are good for realistic lights and designs, but bloom can increase/decrease the glow part of a neon item.

2 | Size

I like how you added a spawn for us to see exactly all of it, but from seeing it, the size is huge! I am unaware of what this is, maybe a RDC 2020 concept or something, but this pillar is massive compared to a roblox avatar!

Thank you for reading, and I hope this can help with it! Keep up the amazing work!

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Yes the logo itself looks amazing, and I’m assuming you made it right? Also might I ask, what is this for?

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The bloom is super high on this. You should turn it down by adding “Bloom” to the lighting property in the explorer. You can then turn down the bloom on it. Looks good though :smiley:

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Looks awesome! I like how you’ve added the roblox studio logo at the bottom of the pillar, it gives it a nice touch!

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can u give an example of bloom?

It’s absolutely brilliant. The pillar is up to it’s highest standards.

Perhaps you could add a (0.7 / 0.8) transparent wall? It will decrease the neon affect on the whole pillar.

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Sure, take a look at this gif I have made:

https://gyazo.com/91de7812b7cd248e51fd494ed7b39ee1

Hopefully this helps!

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the pillar looks nice but the roblox icons needs to be red.

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Since, the roblox logo was changed white I think it’s more better to leave it white since Roblox changed their official logo.

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that is not roblox icon that was roblox studio icon

thx give me example of BLOOM! :ok_hand: :smiley:

Ok! Now I get it! Just leave that way its still attractive and the Roblox Studio Logo you placed there is really much the symbol of development here in Roblox and that is what developers mostly use as a logo, so in general great job on the pillar!
Hope you make more interesting builds or models!

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No problem!

Do you mind sending a screenshot of it updated? Maybe I can give you some feedback on the new bloom.

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