Feedback on my pizza place!

This is my first feedback, I have made some creations before, but I have not shared them.
How can I improve my pizza place?
I know it’s quite simple inside but on the outside I feel it’s also quite simple.

I would appreciate your comments :slight_smile:

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The interior is plain and I get what style you are going for in the windows but they are all up near the tops when some beams should be at bottom, middle, etc. Other than that, it looks awesome, good job.

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I was looking for a nice style for the windows, but I see that I must change them a little, thanks for your comments!

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The outside looks great! The “ROMINO’S” sign might want to have a black or dark background behind it, but that might not be necessary. Your choice.

The interior needs some more pop. I think some stuff on the walls like pictures/paintings and/or a design would be good. I feel like something should be on the tables. I also feel like the stools should be bigger and/or closer to the table. (The stools want to be scooted closer to each other.)

One more thing, the counter needs more stuff; right now it’s just a wood thingy. I could see one of those menu board things above the counter. Maybe add a wall and move the counter towards the right, maybe put the counter in the middle with an employee-only zone to the left.

Great job on this pizza place! I want to walk in and buy some pizza! (with in-game coins, of course)

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The outside looks just fine, though it looks like that middle doorframe part is off centered.

Also, the seats inside would make a player’s legs be on top of the table. I suggest lowering them.
Otherwise just take the above suggestions and use those!

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Yes, I realized that the interior is too simple, but I did not know what to add, thanks and I hope you buy pizza :smiley:

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The seats are not well measured, use a reference but i let it pass, I will change that, thanks!

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Add some decorations on the tables. For example: vases, pots of plant, etc. And add a register on the counter. Additionally, adjust the lighting of the pizza place. Looks dead inside… but overall, it’s great!

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I think it looks great right now but, looking at it I thought it would look cool if you made the white things on the door both go into the direction of the door, Like they both go into the black frame.

Other then that the outside looks good and doesn’t need that much more.

(and for the inside just use other people suggestions loll)

I think you should add more details into it, and like lighting, trees, bushes to make it look nicer. And maybe you should change the material or the color to fit the building. Have fun building!:+1:

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I like the style you’re going for, but the interior is empty and its dark. Add sone light to the inside, and maybe work with actual lighting(shaders).
If your game came with the “Atmosphere”, then turn the density up on that and maybe blur would do good (VERY LITTLE BLUR). Other than that, just mess around with lighting really.

For the outside, maybe a 2-lane road with tunnel entrances at the end, and trees/rocks/park items (like picnic tables). Also maybe do some sun effects.

But those are just ideas, the place looks incredible now though! I’d eat there! lol

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I like the outside but you could put more things in the inside of the restaurant

Thanks, I would like to see you there!

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You have left some spaces here. This is a huge imperfection. I like the exterior, the interior is too plain

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Looks and feels like old Roblox. Maybe add some more furniture inside and make the counter more detailed.

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Thanks to all for the comments :slight_smile:

I recommend you use a texture for the floor