I like it. Maybe make the sign outside less stretched and also maybe some more tables or a carpet in the middle of the shop. Other than that I think it looks great!
Hello
I will be glad to give you feedback, and as to what I think.
Outside Feedback
Changes
The Sign – The sign is way too stretched, make the text less stretched and actually smaller, but more inviting if you know what I mean.
Additions
Landscaping - Add some trees, bushes, flowers around the building, I think this will make it look way better.
Road/Parking - Add a road, maybe some parking spots.
Decorations - Add more detail on the outside to me it looks boring. But totally up to you.
Interior Feedback
Changes
Tables - I would raise the tables up a bit, they look too low just like imagining sitting in it in real life.
The Pizza Oven - I see a bit of a problem with it, as one of the stands in the picture is brick compared to the other one it is wood, I would change the brick one to the wood to match the other one.