Feedback on my Pizza Shop / Restaurant

Hello Devs!, for the past days i’ve building a pizza shop, this is actually my second build and i need some feedback
Here some pictures:

Outside:


Restaurant:


Kitchen:

What else can i add? Should i leave it like that? any suggestion or feedback its appreciated :grinning:

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I suggest you look at photos of real pizza shops to get more ideas.

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I like it. Maybe make the sign outside less stretched and also maybe some more tables or a carpet in the middle of the shop. Other than that I think it looks great!

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Hello
I will be glad to give you feedback, and as to what I think.

Outside Feedback

Changes

  • The Sign – The sign is way too stretched, make the text less stretched and actually smaller, but more inviting if you know what I mean.

Additions

  • Landscaping - Add some trees, bushes, flowers around the building, I think this will make it look way better.

  • Road/Parking - Add a road, maybe some parking spots.

  • Decorations - Add more detail on the outside to me it looks boring. But totally up to you.


Interior Feedback

Changes

  • Tables - I would raise the tables up a bit, they look too low just like imagining sitting in it in real life.

  • The Pizza Oven - I see a bit of a problem with it, as one of the stands in the picture is brick compared to the other one it is wood, I would change the brick one to the wood to match the other one.


    Kitchen Photo.
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    Feedback on my Pizza Shop / Restaurant

Additions

Wall Decoration - I would add some photos on the wall in all the photos you posted. It looks too bland.

Outside Views - I would add some windows to view the outside mostly in the dining room, let some ‘light’ in.

I just realized you had windows already. Ignore the last one.

Conclusion

That’s only things I would suggest, other than that it’s pretty good. Keep up the good work!


Sincerely

StompyDonut
:roblox: Roblox Beta Tester :roblox:

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Well thank you for making a resume of what to fix. I’m sure he found it very helpful.

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Needs more tables, remove the paintings and add details to the walls and everywhere.

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Thank you so much dude!, i will definetly make that changes, :wink:

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