Feedback On My Poke-A-Dot Top Hat!

mattonroblox01 · February 1, 2022, 10:51pm

Put feedback on my Poke-A-Dot top hat down below. I have been working on modeling and wanted to know how this turned out.

departedsir · February 1, 2022, 10:53pm

texturing could do some improving

mattonroblox01 · February 1, 2022, 10:54pm

Yeah, I did the lines to fit the style though.

mattonroblox01 · February 1, 2022, 11:03pm

Would this work better as the texture?

TheDinoGamer1225 · February 2, 2022, 1:31am

i’d work on texturing, also why are polka dots only on top, i think it’d look better if they were all around

dukzae · February 2, 2022, 1:41am

I always appreciate developers trying new things. Right now, you may be in the stage of learning design. For this particular model, there are a couple things you could improve.

For starters, the closely compacted holes trigger trypophobia. You might want to consider enlarging them (and maybe adding a bit variation to their size) and increase distance between the polkadots.
The polkadots should probably be moved to the side. It’s not exactly appealing at the top, especially when the dots go all the way down the model.
The band is uncolored, and the polkadot textures are leaking onto it
The color itself is extremely vibrant, it wouldn’t hurt to experiment with a couple other colors or alter the color that is currently being used.
The color of the dots could be changed as well; you could probably add variations of pastel/bright (not vibrant!) colors.