Hello, my name is Jake.
I recently started creating an obby.
This obby is based on a volcano/lave typer design.
I would like some feedback on my obby.
Here is the link to this obby: Cool_Kidx1's Place Number: 55 - Roblox
Thank you,
Jake
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This is probably good considering all the lava parts you have.
Aside from that it’s really, really, really boring. Trying giving it a world and some kind of narrative to make it more engaging…
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Thank you for your feedback. I’m not that much of a good builder, but I will get into that. Thank you!
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There is a lot of good videos on line that help beginner builders, I’d recommend the model creator and his series on it.
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Thank you very much. I don’t understand how a good person like you is from hell.
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I may be a devil but all that suggests is I’ve been cast out of heaven by god.
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It’s a good starting concept, and I honestly think you have some potential!
Obbies are honestly just very bland in general, so think of ways you can make it unique. One of my favorite games at the moment is Journey to the Sun, an extremely fun and beautiful obby-type game. If you can somehow turn a basic obby into a fun player experience, you should be set for game popularity.
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A few things to note with journy from the sun:
It’s open ended yet you still clearly have a direction to go in.
A clear end, you have a goal to get to.
A story, it has a clearly story and lore you can engage with.
You slowly get more and more powerful as the obby goes on, as you unlock new abilities.
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Thank you for the wonderful feedback. I will look into the games you recommended and try getting some inspiration from those.