not too bad, you could really use a bit more contrast for lighting. Try using cycles for your gfx instead of evee for a better look. Might want to work on more post processing if your pc or whatever you use cant handle rendering. Looks good for a start though
Good lighting but camera is not the best. Try doing better camera angles. Other than that, I love it!
Edit: It looks like you are using evee as the rendering engine. Unless your CPU can’t handle cycles, do cycles for your next test-render.