Feedback on my Renders, Logo's and Thumbnails

Hello, I’ve been creating Renders, Logos Thumbnails etc. For about a year now, I have just recently discovered the Roblox Devforum, so; I want to see what you people think of a few of my pieces. Here it is:

My Pieces


This is just my avatar, I gave it special effects here and there to make it pop. Also if you couldn’t tell already Red is my favourite colour :sunglasses:


This was a commission that I did when I first started doing Thumbnails and Logo’s.


And this was also a commission that I had done.


For this one here I plan on adding a Moon In the background or something, I think the lighting came out well, what do you think?

Well, thank you for scrolling through and looking through my pieces, I’d appreciate it if you sent me some feedback. :+1:

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For a year of experience the renders look decent while your other work looks fine at the start the bottom render the lighting seems not noticeable i perhaps hard on your overall lighting to really capture a bit of realism in the scene if your going for a realistic approach or something simplistic.

I just don’t think the character shouldn’t be posing likes he’s going to beat the enemy up since the evil character seems to be floating and not just some random person include a sword or something that would improve the scene. (Mainly focusing on the fighter character however, if that’s his posing skill you should probably include a sword on his back side ect).

The lighting looks dull, but other than that I’m assuming you should include the lighting in the corner casting shadows on the surface with even reflecting the objects on the ground or if it’s night time include the moon hitting the characters whatever approach you’re going for.

There’s no shadows casting off of the 2nd character, I could see it sort of but it’s not too noticeable perhaps play around with the lighting a bit more instill you see something you like if you enjoy the current lighting source you could always take it a step further to improve the quality of it. Otherwise it’s good progress hope to see you improve in the future.

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