Hello Everyone! Today I made a thumbnail for my friend for his upcoming Restaurant. This was a fully rendered scene and I would love some Feedback on this creation!
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Hehe! Awesome. 
Lovely for my little group.
I would remove the “This Is”
Besides that, I have never seen more perfect thumbnail. I promise, its so clear, good effects,
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As another person said, I would get rid of ‘This is’. To sound better it would have to say ‘These are True American Burgers’, because ‘are’ is used to reference more than one thing, and the things you’re referencing are the burgers. Also, it looks like you may have reused the same character hair and outfit twice, once with the person in the front, once with the cashier, and the only difference is the sheet of white paper over the first person’s face. Other than that, it looks great!
What an outstanding and promising thumbnail! However, as @BananaCZSweSaim said, I would take away the “This is”
Other than that, this is amazing! 
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It’s fine to me, there are some issues I see with the background more props or little tables/chairs could make the background more interesting in a kind of way.
The photo shows not much going on even if you’re going for a basic restaurant design. Try throwing more props to have have that restaurant feel (this could be a group or people eating, socializing with each other) maybe add menus decorations to have that resemblance.
The pose seems very basic and well put together perhaps more characters ordering food and possibly characters looking at the person that slipped on a wet floor spot try playing around with placing other items featuring different poses.
Other than that it’s a good thumbnail i would just focus more on the background and decoration to capture a better result there’s much you can do with this just don’t overdo the details.