Hi Everyone! This is my first post, I just wanna post one of my builds that I’m really proud off.
I would just like some feedback on what I could improve on, and how much I could get for it!
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Wowie! Good job, and welcome to DevForum. I also just got the New Member badge too! 
I think you could get around 3 - 5k for it.
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Wonderful!I personally do find the walls (how you used bricks) a bit off,but apart from that everything is a level above perfection.keep it up!
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Wow, looks really good, I’d say you could get around 10-12k for it if the interior is as detailed as the outside.
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I don‘t know what you could improve. It‘s just wonderful.
7k-10k (or a bit more) would be a good Price for this.
Good Job i really like it 
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it’s too orange, the lighting aswell. Other than that, it’s good, It actually looks like a cafe that would sell for alot.
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Steel beams overlap, might need to fix that. Looks well textured, although the ceiling is putting me a bit off so I would either add some texture to it or use a different color.
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Looks amazing, I love how much detail you put into the build!
Here are some suggestions to help improve, feel free to take these into consideration:
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Add something to the roof extending out at the bottom, it looks a little less detailed compared to the building itself. You could try adding parts crossing over each other or something, but I love the lighting!
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Add detail to the tables, you could try adding plates, flowers, candles, streaming pots to fit the design, menu cards, etc.
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Add detail to the outside on the paths, you could try adding chairs that people may like to sit on while looking upon the ocean view. You could also add light poles, more terrain to the sides of the paths, etc.
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That is quite nice! The only suggestion I have for now is adding terrain, grass, and possibly water out around your restaurant to give it a nice feel to it! And welcome to the DevForum! Happy building!
What it’s worth
I think the build could sell for about 
3 thousand - 6 thousand. The level of detail is impressive; the lighting is spot on; there are barely no faults to this. I’m sure you will find a good buyer.
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[quote=“Dev_Chamy, post:2, topic:438685”]
Wowie! Good job, and welcome to DevForum. I also just got the New Member badge too! I think you could get around 3 - 5k for it.
[/quote] I think the same @Dev_Chamy it looks very nice
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