Feedback on my Rose Model

sniff… sniff… Is that a rose I smell? I recently made a rose model and would like feedback on it! (Placed in it studios to see how it would look). Thanks!

Btw! My commissions are open

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Looks rlly good! I would make the glass a little less transparent tho (personal opinion tho)

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This looks really nice! I think the glass should look a little shinier, and the roses don’t really look like they’re touching the glass, but the rose models are really good. 8/10, looks really cool.

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The stem could use more detail and you should add water :slight_smile:

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It looks really good to start off. I’d recommend, however:

  • Making the flowers have more of a cup shape rather than a inverted cone shape. See this image:
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  • You should also add sepals. Those are the little leaf-like things outside a flower.
  • Next, the petals get higher up the further you get inside. Right now it looks like the inside is lower.
  • I’d also recommend adding leaves. See the image above.
  • You should also add thorns.
  • Consider adding water in the vase, it would make it more realistic.
  • Consider making this weird part of the vase:
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    The darker part, not visible.
  • I would also up the reflectance of the vase so it’s doesn’t look like plastic.
  • Consider making the bottom of the vase flat so it’s more realistic. So it doesn’t roll around.

Anyways I hope this helped. Good job! o((^▽^))o

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Either that or change the colour to a more bold colour like red or purple.

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hey, this looks amazing!

make the stems longer so it doesn’t look like it’s floating

Hello @BrinnyBlox,

I think the roses look very good. They are low polly but if that is what you want then that is ok. I would advise you to make the steams longer just to make it look a little more realistic.