Feedback on my "Ruins Showcase"

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#1

Hello, Today I have a surprise from my Official Group OptOff Studios, to showcase development stage of this showcase.
note there is lots of use of blood but there is a minimal use of it.
What Are We Looking For?

We Need Feedback, Ideas, and Criticism (PROPER CRITICISM!)
I will showcase a Slide show of images and a final video.
CREDITS: Terran4627 For the vehicles

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#2

It’s pretty good!

The dead hazmat guy is somewhat disturbing, but it feels very realistic, and I guess that is the point. The vehicles’s texture is very good, and the map is decent…

I would rate this 9/10

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#3

It seemed too bright, but i guess this is for easy editing, 9.5/10

#4

There is too much brown mud. It drowns the scene. I suggest adding more color and adding a sky.

#5

To rate the quality, it’s 8/10, definitely pretty good.
A bit too complex overall, compared to already nearly perfect trenches like in trenches (not a pun) or the upcoming FPS games on Roblox, but everyone still agrees that you spent a good amount of time on this.

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#6

the lighting has not been added in yet this is only the map

#7

the lighting has not been added in yet and the idea is for it to be at night. that will be later. I plan to make a series of topics.

#8

thank you for your feedback, I will make another topic on the updated version of this

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